PARTIAL MANUSCRIPT ASSESSMENT
Item details: Bren would like to share her skill at first person narratives and world-building with another writer writing in first person in Children's or YA in any genre, or writing first person in adult science fiction, by offering feedback on the first five scenes of their work in progress with a focus on point of view, voice and world-building, plus a signed copy of her award-winning debut YA novel In the Dark Spaces (can be substituted for one of her children's books).
Item conditions/restrictions: Feedback can include reading, editing, discussion, question and answers. You can work by email, zoom, or phone call, as Bren is 7 hours north of Perth.
Donated by: Bren MacDibble
Bren MacDibble is an award-winning Children's and YA writer (writing as Cally Black) based in regional Western Australia. Her books have won three NZ Book Awards, a CBCA Award, a Queensland Lit Award, an Aurealis Award, and a NSW Premiers Award. Her books are set in climate affected or strange new futures and are known for their intensive first person style and unique voices as well as world-building.
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Starting bid: $10 (AUD)